tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2811017274988831596.post7536347304978181539..comments2023-07-17T04:36:30.345-04:00Comments on Meredith Miotke Illustration: JungleMeredith Miotkehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05864454648999450486noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2811017274988831596.post-84736768551848935902012-08-20T16:47:20.654-04:002012-08-20T16:47:20.654-04:00Any suggestions!? I'm still learning type (cle...Any suggestions!? I'm still learning type (clearly, haha).Meredith Miotkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05864454648999450486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2811017274988831596.post-57932822385667412682012-08-20T16:44:58.609-04:002012-08-20T16:44:58.609-04:00I think the type could be more better executed. I ...I think the type could be more better executed. I don't think that font goes well with your illustration.Jennifer Choihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09135658057012645311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2811017274988831596.post-36324555234093039662012-08-20T00:11:25.174-04:002012-08-20T00:11:25.174-04:00Put a bird on it.
Lol, but no it's pretty perf...Put a bird on it.<br />Lol, but no it's pretty perf.<br /><br />For this version, I would keep everything the same except for the "The Jungle" text, it looks squished or elongated when compared to the spine? Maybe it's just some sort of illusion. I don't know if you need the buyer beware tag; one chunk of text might work better than three paragraphs of different widths.<br /><br />For a different version you could take out the top neutral color chunk and just have the meat and that green color; and push the meat all the way up and have the text where that tagline is at. Or you could flip the meat and keep your title where it's at.<br /><br />The color scheme is really great, especially the dark olive spine against the rest of the colorsSeabasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06614212322262018773noreply@blogger.com